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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 16 August 2021

writing about specific pictures

 Today my class was writing about pictures but we have to write everything that leads up to the scene that happens in the picture here is my writing hope you enjoy.

Its day 15438 being the last man alive after what happened 40 years ago.

Aliens arrived from the distant planet called Bolobolo.

They’ve been looking for me for so long but then this huge alien warship spots me and immediately they get in hyper speed and we get into a high speed chase luckily I have the fastest motorbike invented by the aliens themselves.

I infiltrated their alien mothership and stole their most prized possession.

I called it the michael jackson-mobile but they called it ihsfhksejfhkjhl. 

But anyways as we’re in the heat of the moment I teleport with the bike to the safest place on earth called Mc donalds cause I was hungry and I made an indestructible base made out of the remains of the people that died the smell was even too putrid even the aliens wouldn't come close but one.

He was the most feared alien bounty hunter. He betrayed the human race because he was neglected but his family and he was enraged because no one loved him and so he betrayed everyone.

He caught me and stabbed me. I thought I died but it was only just a dream.

Friday, 26 March 2021

Narrative writing

 This week we have been learning about writing a narrative and all the structure that goes with it this is my narrative and I hope you like it


Friday, 13 November 2020

Arataki progame

Every Tuesday we go down to the fire station just down the road from our school and we ride bikes,do a obstacle course that will test our strengths and will. the main reason we do this program is to learn resilience.
this week we couldn't go down due to the weather that was going to happen.
this is a picture of us doing the drill we have to do.
i found it fun because of our teacher that was teaching us to learn the drills he is cool as hope we could do it three times a week.

Thursday, 2 July 2020

Pick a Path

This week since it is the last week of school we had to finish some work we haven't done yet. We had a choice to choose between many styles of writing and a chose a narrative and its called a pick a path story. What I hard about it was to base it on the story I was writing and try not to off track. What I found easy was to get help from my friends to get ideas. my Goal for next time is to make more problems and soulutions.

Tuesday, 16 June 2020

Ngaio project

Last week we learnt about ngaio. Ngaio is a plant that heals things like broken bones and more. I enjoyed working with my friend and leaning about new things about rongoa. What I found hard was finding all the right facts and what it heals. This was one of my favorite pieces of writing because its based on our Maori culture.
My next step is to write more in my little bit of time that I get and to add more detail.

Tuesday, 9 June 2020

How to make Kawakawa oil

My class has been learning how to write a decent piece of procedural writing and our topic was Kawakawa oil. I learnt to use verbs at the start of every step. I liked finding new things about Kawakawa oil and what it helps heals and all the other uses that it can be used for. the thing I found hard was writing all the steps down in one day because I wasn't here the day everyone was here. My next steps are to remember all the things that I used in this writing and write it but 100 times better.    

Tuesday, 26 May 2020

Senses During Lockdown

I was learning about the five senses and what it was like in our lock down. Our task was to make a poem about the five senses and this is my poem. I found the poem easy to make cause all I had to do was think back about a week and write down what I remember. It was hard to just continue to come up with the right sentences in the right way cause it had to have then right sentence structure and we had to add a little more detail at the end. Next time I will try and add some more detail to my senteces.

Friday, 22 May 2020

The first week after lockdown

tThis week we have been back at school its been really different compared to all the other times we were at school.
When I say different I mean everything has changed 1 metre apart is like impossible because me and my friend's are so annoyed with these rules cause we cant sit next to each other we cant do anything together but its the rules that will keep us safe from Covid-19.
We said once these rules are put down we are going to have so much fun.

My lockdown has been a sprinkle cause my hose has been a bit quite cause my family has been gone to Whangarei to stay at my aunts house so it was really quite like 7 of them left.
17 people was in my house and my house is really big so i could fit probably fit 2 people in my house and even better we have a pool but sad for me my arm was broken so I couldn't go for a swim.

I have enjoyed going back to school to play with my friends and eating my lunch at school.
the best thing at school was going to see my friend and playing touch instead of play fortnite all day and night so thats what I enjoyed about going to school.



Tuesday, 2 April 2019

invisible woman

together we stand strong

this week we had to post our poems for Christchurch and this is my poem for the people that had lost ones they had loved.

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

This is my poetry

Im am leaning to write different poem"s