Tuesday 9 June 2020
How to make Kawakawa oil
My class has been learning how to write a decent piece of procedural writing and our topic was Kawakawa oil.
I learnt to use verbs at the start of every step.
I liked finding new things about Kawakawa oil and what it helps heals and all the other uses that it can be used for.
the thing I found hard was writing all the steps down in one day because I wasn't here the day everyone was here.
My next steps are to remember all the things that I used in this writing and write it but 100 times better.
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Well done with your mahi Kieron, you did well to complete it having missed a day during the writing. My only advise would be to ensure you have your subheadings. E.g. Goal, Materials, Method, Check.
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